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the only thing i would suggest is working a little more on the hair, it looks a little flat in texture when compared to the rest of the painting. but other than that, holy shit this is incredible.

PkBlitz responds:

Hair is still a nightmare for me! if you have any tips on how to make that better, it'd be awesome. I'll never be completely happy with this no matter how much I polish it, but the hair is the thing I'm the least happy with... thanks a lot for the review!

Edit: make that tip (if there is any) a PM, since you can't really reply to this, because, Newgrounds.

dude I don't know what you're on, but this painting is fuckin rad.

jhonatan520 responds:

Lol! Thank you, man!

it still looks rough, but if that's your style, then it's all good. when drawing rain, make sure it's all falling in one direction, which it looks like you've been doing, but the few drops that go in different directions throws it off. also, make sure that there's rain in front of the character as well. pretty cool piece overall.

Laureallis responds:

Thank you! I did notice I forgot to put rain in front of him as I uploaded it, too late now. Sometimes when lines are sketchy and sometimes they're really smooth and loose, it just depends.

the shadows could be a little harsher, but this is sick. i like the references on her hairpins.

uricksaladbar responds:

Shadows are always a struggle of mine, especially with skin.
Further practice is in need indeed!

nice expressions. i like how his brows are always like that no matter what his emotion is.

JamesDrawsLewdThings responds:

Thank you :)

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